This Is The Story
This is the story.
This is the narrative of your life
and mine but
I've yet to write it and
I don't think I can
because paralysis
sets in and then
my bones turn
to glaciers and my mind
becomes a mountain, stretching
up forever, moving
nothing.
This is the story I
will never write.
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This just came from nowhere. Here it is.
Kalinka Blue.
4 comments:
Random wrighting is fun!! I do it all the time like once I was just kinda sitting hear and I came up with this line..."Satans got a soft side,I know beacuse of seen it, I know beacuse I've ben it and I couldnt belive it, I love him"...Yeah dont ask.....Hehe. You come up with great things when you dont think of them.
The Soft side,
Jesse
I keep trying to write a comment on what I think about the message of the poem itself. But everything I try to write seems to come out wrong and inadequate and I can't post it with feeling like I wasn't properly expressing how I really feel about it all and I have to erase the whole thing and start over.
I feel really cheap saying only this, but it's all I got: I really like the peom. Even if the meaning is kinda lost on me.
Marr Vell
Wait, did I unwittingly discover the meaning of the poem while writing my comment?
Serendipity,
Marr Vello
To put it simply - yes.
Kalinka B.
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