Sunday, August 27, 2006

Alright, a friend asked me to write a poem about my stomach - but I like sharing my writing here too(warning: it's rather black and personal)...so here it is:

Stomach
And even when they said you weren’t there,
I could see you,
I heard.

You,
I wanted to stop you from growing and life
stopped instead.

And even when they said you’d win in the end,
I tore out your eyes,

I silenced you. Now
I stand defeated,

Skeletal,
ineffectual.

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I probably don't have to tell you what it's about.

- Kal.

5 comments:

Marr said...

I...I don't know what to say.

Congratualtions Kalinka, you've rendered me speechless.

Marr Vell

The whisper in your ear said...

Very nice. It's...differnt. I liked it.

Fleur De'La Fay said...

good job kal its not from experince is it?

Kalinka said...

It sort of is Kylaia. Past experience though.

- Kal.

Fleur De'La Fay said...

ohh im glad its past. One question why? you dont have to awansere that.